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My favorite superhero is Iron Man.

유수빈/2025-07-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My favorite superhero is Iron Man. His appearance in a strong suit is attractive, and above all, his pleasant appearance is impressive.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara!^^

I do not have a favorite superhero.
But I prefer the Avengers to the Justice League. 
Their personalities and superpowers are more interesting. 

Andrea 

My favorite superhero is Iron Man.
>> Correct 

His appearance in a strong suit is attractive, and above all, his pleasant appearance is impressive.
>> He looks so attractive in his suit, and above all, his pleasant personality is impressive. 
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