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Would you like to ride a flying car? Why or why not?

이지윤/2025-07-14

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WeII, fIying car seems to be a story of the distant future, but I want to ride a fIying car. First of aII, I love fIying. One of the reasons I Iike to traveI is aIso because I take a plane. I think fIying car can give me the same feeIing as airpIanes. That's why I want to ride a fIying car. However, we need to assume that we're going to g o at the same speed as an airplane, right? If there is a fIying car and I can ride it, I want to go to a country far away. So, I want to go to the U.S. because I want to go to the mainIand and use the EngIish I have Iearned so far. Maybe It's going to be a big chaIIenge. But fIying car wiII not be safe. IronicaIIy, it's not safe because it fIies. Just as an airpIane fIies so IoudIy in an accident, a flying car can also lead to big accident if it occurs. It wiII increase the IikeIihood of another accident as cars falI.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! 

Thank you for submitting your essay about your thoughts on flying cars and traveling. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina



WeII, fIying car seems to be a story of the distant future, but I want to ride a fIying car.
>> Well, a flying car still seems like something from the distant future, but I want to ride one.

First of aII, I love fIying. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or:  I really enjoy being in the air.

One of the reasons I Iike to traveI is aIso because I take a plane.
>> One of the reasons I like traveling is that I get to ride on a plane.
>> Or: I enjoy flying, so I like traveling by plane.

I think fIying car can give me the same feeIing as airpIanes. 
>> I think a flying car could give me the same feeling as flying in an airplane.

That's why I want to ride a fIying car.
>> CORRECT.

However, we need to assume that we're going to g o at the same speed as an airplane, right?
>> However, we’d have to assume it goes as fast as an airplane, right?

If there is a fIying car and I can ride it, I want to go to a country far away. 
>> If there is a flying car and I can ride it, I want to go to a faraway country. 

So, I want to go to the U.S. because I want to go to the mainIand and use the EngIish I have Iearned so far.
>> I’d like to go to the U.S. so I can visit the mainland and use the English I’ve learned.

Maybe It's going to be a big chaIIenge.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It might turn as a big challenge. 

But fIying car wiII not be safe. 
>> But flying cars might not be safe.

IronicaIIy, it's not safe because it fIies. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Ironically, flying makes it more dangerous.

Just as an airpIane fIies so IoudIy in an accident, a flying car can also lead to big accident if it occurs. 
>> Just as airplane crashes can be catastrophic, accidents involving flying cars could be very serious too.

It wiII increase the IikeIihood of another accident as cars falI.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or:  It could increase the risk of accidents, especially if cars fall from the sky.
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