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What would be the biggest challenge of living on an island?

이승훈/2025-07-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

the first, it is difficult to meet friend on land. i am in order to meet friend, i should take a airplane. so i should airplane ticket. airplane ticket is expensive. so i can't be able to go on land often. the second, i can work on possible company is limited. island's company is less than on land's company. so if i want change work, i should transfer to on land.

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Hi, Hun!

I totally agree with you. I watched a Korean drama titled "Welcome to Samdal-ri," and I realized that people living on Jeju Island seem to be living in a different country than mainland Korea. The mainland is very different from how they live their lives there, and you are right; opportunities might be limited on islands.

- T. Caitlyn

The first, it is difficult to meet friend on land.

>> First, it is difficult to meet friends on the mainland.
i am in order to meet friend, i should take a airplane. so i should airplane ticket.

>> In order to meet my friends, I have to take an airplane. So, I need an airplane ticket.
airplane ticket is expensive. so i can't be able to go on land often.

>> Airplane tickets are expensive, so I can’t go to the mainland often.
the second, i can work on possible company is limited.

>> Second, the number of companies I can work for is limited.
island's company is less than on land's company.

>> There are fewer companies on the island than on the mainland.
so if i want change work, i should transfer to on land.

>> So, if I want to change jobs, I have to move to the mainland.