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Why do you think the “godsaeng” lifestyle has become so popular among young people in South Korea?
김유진/2025-07-16
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Godseng lifestyle is being popularized because people are falling in love to their selve living productively. Also people are interested in diet, studying, skin care, and those stuff and godseng include those things. So people are following godseng routine to self-care.
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Thank you for this Eugene!
Godseng lifestyle is being popularized because people are falling in love to their selve living productively.
>>> Godsaeng lifestyle is being popularized because people are falling in love to the idea of themselves living productively.
Also people are interested in diet, studying, skin care, and those stuff and godseng include those things.
>>> Also, people are interested in dieting, studying, skin care, and those other stuff and a godsaeng lifestyle includes those things.
So people are following godseng routine to self-care.
>>> So people are following godseng routine for self-care.
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