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이연숙/2025-07-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

>> Do you recess is important in schools? Give 3 to 5 reasons why it's important or not. If we continue to take classes without a break time, we'll experience a lot of stress. And we will lost our knowledge and concentrate. Lastly, it is not helpful to studying.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Yeonsuk

Well done! I would like to commend you for following the instruction clearly.

~Teacher Jess

If we continue to take classes without a break time, we'll experience a lot of stress.

>> If we continue to take classes without taking a break, we will get stress.

And we will lost our knowledge and concentrate.

>> We might lose our knowledge and might have a hard time to concentrate.

Lastly, it is not helpful to studying.

>> CORRECT