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I think the Korean product most proud is chocolate pie because it is very famous in army. So I think chocolate pie is very famous.

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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. Have a good night's sleep!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Which Korean product are you most proud of and why?

I think the Korean product most proud is chocolate pie because it is very famous in army.

>>> I think the Korean product people are most proud of is Choco Pie because it's very popular in the military.

So I think chocolate pie is very famous.

>>> That’s why I think Choco Pie is well-known.