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양기연/2025-07-18

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I remember that I was shocked at the movie, Galaxy Express 999. It was a SF movie by a famous Japanese director. I was the first time I watched a SF animation movie. The story was very novel and interesting. I was into the female protagonist,Metel. Since I watched the animation, I have watched many animation movies. Lately I watched the movie,Inside Out 2. I was touched to tears while watching the movie.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

Thank you for doing your homework! I agree with you; sometimes animated films are very touching, to the point that they make us feel even more than regular films. It’s been a while since I watched a new animated movie, but one that usually makes me cry is Meet the Robinsons.

- T. Caitlyn

I remember that I was shocked at the movie, Galaxy Express 999.

>> CORRECT

It was a SF movie by a famous Japanese director.

>> It was a sci-fi movie by a famous Japanese director.

I was the first time I watched a SF animation movie.

>> It was the first time I watched a sci-fi animated movie.

The story was very novel and interesting.

>> CORRECT

I was into the female protagonist,Metel.

>> CORRECT

Since I watched the animation, I have watched many animation movies.

>> Since I watched that animation, I have watched many animated movies.

Lately I watched the movie,Inside Out 2.

>> CORRECT

I was touched to tears while watching the movie.

>> CORRECT