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What places do you want to visit someday?

차진혁/2025-07-20

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I want to visit places is Finland because Santa is in the Finland Sant village. So I want to go to the Finland in December.
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Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                              


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I want to visit places is Finland because Santa is in the Finland Sant village.
>>> The place I want to visit is Finland because Santa lives in Santa Claus Village. 

So I want to go to the Finland in December.
>>> That’s why I want to go there in December.
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