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Brad and Serena have been married for eight years and are going through tough times. They argue a lo

김유진/2025-07-21

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To encourage both bard and serena understand each other and not divorce, They should think in others perspective. So one way to do that is bard and serena changing their jobs. So bard can raise children for one day and Serena can go to work for a money for one day. So if they try each other’s job and understand both jobs are hard, they can think both job is valuable and should not ignore.

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Thank you for this Eugene! That's a good idea, but I think they should do it for a month or two to really feel and experience it enough until they actually grow tired of it.

To encourage both bard and serena understand each other and not divorce, They should think in others perspective.

>> To encourage both Brad and Serena to understand each other and not get a divorce, they should think from the other's perspective.

So one way to do that is bard and serena changing their jobs.

>> One way to do that is for Brad and Serena to exchange situations with each other.

So bard can raise children for one day and Serena can go to work for a money for one day.

>> Brad can raise the children for one day and Serena can go to work for money for one day.

So if they try each other’s job and understand both jobs are hard, they can think both job is valuable and should not ignore.

>> So if they try each other’s job and understand both jobs are hard, they can think both jobs are valuable and should not be ignored.