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최현영/2025-07-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It is a my hometown There is changwon Famous is big cafes
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Hyeon yeong. You did well giving short information about your hometown. Your sentences show what you want to say, and with just a few small changes they become clear and natural. Keep practicing writing about places and things you know. It helps you build confidence and learn how to express ideas better in English. I will keep helping you step by step.

~ T. Lia

It is a my hometown
>> It is my hometown.

There is changwon
>> It is in Changwon.

Famous is big cafes
>> It is famous for its big cafes.
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