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회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes I am, I want to grow vegetables an farm because vegetables is very tasty. So I want to grow my vegetables.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below. Good night to you, there!

Cheers,

Jean~~

Would you like to live an a farm an grow vegetables? Explain your answer?

Yes I am, I want to grow vegetables an farm because vegetables is very tasty.

So I want to grow my vegetables.

>>> Yes, I do. I want to grow vegetables on a farm because they are very tasty. That's why I want to grow my own vegetables.

>>> OR: Absolutely! I’d love to grow my own vegetables; they’re just so tasty.