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Why do you think the “godsaeng” lifestyle has become so popular among young people in South Korea?

신봉규/2025-07-23

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They want to do many things and they envy those who do many things. I don't understand why people just envy them when they can do 'godsaeng'. Perhaps they envy people's diligent lives because they don't do it themselves.
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Hi! I’m thrilled that you took the time to complete the homework. Your experiences and ideas were shared wonderfully—keep up the fantastic work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^


They want to do many things and they envy those who do many things. I don't understand why people just envy them when they can do 'godsaeng'. Perhaps they envy people's diligent lives because they don't do it themselves.

They want to do many things, and they envy those who actually do them. I don’t understand why people choose to envy others when they can live a “godsaeng” life themselves. Maybe they admire the diligence of others because they aren’t putting in the same effort.
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