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When choosing cosmetics

양기연/2025-07-24

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I consider the recommendations of my acquaintances when choosing new products including cosmetics. And then I search for reviews online. When choosing some cosmetics, I am mostly affected by my youngest daughter. She is excellent at searching for useful information and reviews. She usually makes good judgments whenever we purchase something especially buying cosmetics because her skin is sensitive and she is always cautious about some cosmetics.

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Hi, Gi Yean!

It's nice that you have different options to decide whether to buy a product or not. Actually, when it comes to cosmetics, I don't completely trust reviews or recommendations because I believe everyone has different genes and reactions to products, so trying them yourself is still the best way to check if a product is effective or not.

- T. Caitlyn

I consider the recommendations of my acquaintances when choosing new products including cosmetics.

>> CORRECT

And then I search for reviews online.

>> CORRECT

When choosing some cosmetics, I am mostly affected by my youngest daughter.

>> CORRECT

She is excellent at searching for useful information and reviews.

>> CORRECT

She usually makes good judgments whenever we purchase something especially buying cosmetics because her skin is sensitive and she is always cautious about some cosmetics.

>> She usually makes good judgments whenever we purchase something, especially cosmetics, because her skin is sensitive and she is always cautious about what she uses.