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Do you check the weather forecast before traveling? Why or why not?

이승훈/2025-07-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

i always checking weather forecast before traveling. because weather is most important in travel. if i don't checking weather forecast, i difficult to enjoy in travel. and if weather is freezing cold or scolching hot, i have difficult to moved another place. so i should be check the weather before traveling. i have to make many good memories in travel. in order to make a good memories, good weather is very important and essencial.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! It's important to check the weather to prepare ourselves for the conditions in the place we will be visiting, so we can also adjust our activities based on it.

- T, Caitlyn

i always checking weather forecast before traveling.

>> I always check the weather forecast before traveling.
because weather is most important in travel.

>> Because weather is the most important part of travel.
if i don't checking weather forecast, i difficult to enjoy in travel.

>> If I don't check the weather forecast, it's difficult to enjoy traveling.
and if weather is freezing cold or scolching hot, i have difficult to moved another place.

>> And if the weather is freezing cold or scorching hot, it's hard for me to move to another place.
so i should be check the weather before traveling.

>> So I should check the weather before traveling.
I have to make many good memories in travel.

>> CORRECT
in order to make a good memories, good weather is very important and essencial.

>> In order to make good memories, good weather is very important and essential.