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이상도/2025-07-24

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HOMEWORK: If you could start your own business, what kind of business would you start? I personally want to try a food business. Especially, I want to try meat, especially pork, because I like pork. Along with Korean BBQ dishes, I would like to modify Korean food to make more popular dishes.
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Hello, Alex!
I was surprised to learn that you are also interested in the food industry, even though I frequently hear Koreans want to try their hand at it. Do you cook? Ahhhh... seems fascinating!
Chammy
I personally want to try a food business. Especially, I want to try meat, especially pork, because I like pork.
Along with Korean BBQ dishes, I would like to modify Korean food to make more popular dishes.
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>> I'd like to try my hand at a food business. I want to try meat, particularly pork, because I enjoy it.
>> In addition to Korean barbecue, I would like to turn Korean cuisine into more widely consumed dishes.
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