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전창민/2025-07-27

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HOMEWORK: What’s the most memorable vacation you’ve had? I remembered that I went Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia. I was first trip after honeymoon. But It is terrible. because It is rainny on trip. and Hotel is terrible. lizard appearance in the room. My wife is screamed and cried. I don' forget on vacation. But the sunset in Kota Kinabalu is very nice. and Boating and scuba diving, in the sea, it was very good.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

H! Sir Chang Min, this is such a funny story to tell, and I enjoyed reading about your memorable vacation. I hope you can add more unforgettable experiences together with your wife. Here are the corrections I've made to make your storytellingperfect. T. Linda

I remembered that I went Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia.

>> I remember when I went to Kota Kinabalu in Malaysia.

I was first trip after honeymoon.

>> It was our first trip after the honeymoon.

But It is terrible. because It is rainny on trip. and Hotel is terrible. lizard appearance in the room.

>> But it was a terrible trip since it was a raining during the trip, the hotel is terrible and lizard appeared in the room.

My wife is screamed and cried. I don' forget on vacation.

>>My wife screamed and cried. I can't forget that vacation.

But the sunset in Kota Kinabalu is very nice. and Boating and scuba diving, in the sea, it was very good.

>> But the sunset in Kota Kinabalu is very nice, boating, scuba diving,and the sea, it was very good.