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Spontaneous trip

양기연/2025-07-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Unplanned and spontaneous trips always makes me excited. I can go anywhere and do whatever I want to. This spring, my husband and I met in Yeoju, where we could enjoy cherry blossom festival. Joining the local festival, I could know the city's special products such as savory peanuts. Last Friday, we met in Wonju, where we visited Museum San art gallery. Traveling other cities,we can enjoy unexpected local events, visit museums or galleries, and sometimes hike or take a walk. Spontaneous trips give us much pleasure.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

It's nice that you can have spontaneous trips whenever you feel like it. I think these kinds of trips are really great because they come with fewer expectations, so we sometimes end up having the best time and experience!

- T. Caitlyn

Unplanned and spontaneous trips always makes me excited.

>> Unplanned and spontaneous trips always make me excited.

I can go anywhere and do whatever I want to.

>> CORRECT

This spring, my husband and I met in Yeoju, where we could enjoy cherry blossom festival.

>> This spring, my husband and I met in Yeoju, where we could enjoy the cherry blossom festival.

Joining the local festival, I could know the city's special products such as savory peanuts.

>> By joining the local festival, I learned about the city's special products such as savory peanuts.

Last Friday, we met in Wonju, where we visited Museum San art gallery.

>> Last Friday, we met in Wonju, where we visited the Museum SAN art gallery.

Traveling other cities,we can enjoy unexpected local events, visit museums or galleries, and sometimes hike or take a walk.

>> By traveling to other cities, we can enjoy unexpected local events, visit museums or galleries, and sometimes hike or take a walk.

Spontaneous trips give us much pleasure.

>> Spontaneous trips give us a lot of pleasure.