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What is your favorite relaxing indoor activity?

송정아/2025-07-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like to drink coffee. A type of my favorite coffee is drip coffee. My favorite coffee bean is Ethiopian because of unique taste. Drip coffee smells good. I enjoy the taste slowly. A cup of coffee to realx is able to beginning of the day happily.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Jane!

Coffee is life. I wonder how the Ethiopian coffee tastes like. I believe the aroma is inviting and the taste is even better.

I love coffee too. Vietnamese coffee are not very sweet and aromatic as well. What would our lives be without a cup of coffee.

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-T. Donna~

>> I like to drink coffee. A type of my favorite coffee is the drip coffee. My favorite coffee bean is Ethiopian because of its unique taste. Drip coffee smells good. I enjoy the taste by drinking it slowly. A cup of coffee to relax is able to begin the day happily.