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Where is your favorite restaurant? What makes it your favorite?

이지윤/2025-07-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Well, speaking of restaurants with brands, I like OutBack. This is a popular family restaurant in Korea, and it is one of the most expensive restaurants. So, I visit there whenever something special happens. This is a great place for couples to date and a great place for familes to go. This is decorated with an antique interior design, which makes me feel like a very special person to eat in a special place and I love the atmosphere of the restaurant. In addition, the crew is kind and provides satisfactory service, and evne if it is expensive, it is worth a lot of money because it provides food as a course meal that gives appetizers, main dishes, and desserts. My favorite dish among the restaurant's own is Toowoomba pasta and fried wing. Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and it is a popular menu at the restaurant. The fried wing is very crispy, so it's good to taste the delicious taste of chicken.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi! 

Thank you so much for sharing about your favorite restaurant. 
It's nice to know that there is a restaurant you enjoy going to, especially during special occasions. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina



Well, speaking of restaurants with brands, I like OutBack.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: When it comes to branded restaurants, OutBack is my favorite.

This is a popular family restaurant in Korea, and it is one of the most expensive restaurants. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It’s a popular family restaurant in Korea and is considered one of the more expensive ones.

So, I visit there whenever something special happens.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: So, I usually go there when there’s something special to celebrate.

This is a great place for couples to date and a great place for familes to go.
>> It’s a great place for couples to go on dates and for families to enjoy meals together.

This is decorated with an antique interior design, which makes me feel like a very special person to eat in a special place and I love the atmosphere of the restaurant. 
>> The restaurant has an antique interior design that makes me feel like I’m dining somewhere special. I really love the atmosphere.

In addition, the crew is kind and provides satisfactory service, and evne if it is expensive, it is worth a lot of money because it provides food as a course meal that gives appetizers, main dishes, and desserts.
>> Also, the staff are kind and provide excellent service. Even though it’s expensive, it’s worth the money because the meals include appetizers, main courses, and desserts.

My favorite dish among the restaurant's own is Toowoomba pasta and fried wing.
>> My favorite dishes at the restaurant are the Toowoomba pasta and the fried wings.

Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and it is a popular menu at the restaurant. 
>> Toowoomba pasta is a spicy cream pasta and one of the most popular dishes on the menu.

The fried wing is very crispy, so it's good to taste the delicious taste of chicken.
>> The fried wings are very crispy, so you can really enjoy the delicious flavor of the chicken.
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