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what is the longest time I slept

홍진기/2025-07-30

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I dont remember it obviously, but I think that it is about 12 hours. Because at the before day night, I played games with my friends for a long time. In the other day, I also slept for 12 hours because of gathered tiredness by a lot of homework and exams.

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Hi, Jacob!
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I dont remember it obviously, but I think that it is about 12 hours.

>> I don't remember it obviously, but I think that it is about 12 hours.

Because at the before day night, I played games with my friends for a long time.

>> CORRECT!

In the other day, I also slept for 12 hours because of gathered tiredness by a lot of homework and exams.

>> On the other day, I also slept for 12 hours because of gathered tiredness by a lot of homework and exams.