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권수경/2025-07-30

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

1,This is when I first registered at the cultural center. 2,We had an awkward but interesting conversation because we met by common interests. 3,We had a lecture about painting and had an interesting conversation.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Here's your corrected homework, Ms. Jane. Please go over the revisions given below.

Have a good night's sleep and see you tomorrow!

Cheers,

Jean~~

1. This is when I first registered at the cultural center.

>>> This was the moment I first registered at the cultural center.

>>> OR: This was when I officially registered at the cultural center for the first time.

2. We had an awkward but interesting conversation because we met by common interests.

>>> We had an awkward yet interesting conversation, sparked by our shared interests.

>>> OR: We ended up having an awkward but fascinating conversation, thanks to our mutual interests.

3. We had a lecture about painting and had an interesting conversation.

>>> We listened to a lecture about painting and had an insightful talk afterward.

>>> OR: We attended a lecture on painting and ended up having a lively discussion afterward.