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"Conversation is an exercise of the mind; gossip is merely an exercise of the tongue." What does t

김재서/2025-07-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I agree. Conversation needs thinking, but gossip is just meaningless. I don’t like gossip, but I sometimes talk about people who hurt me.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jae Seo. Please take a look at the corrections below. Also, send me a message through this website regarding the difference between May I and Can I so I can send you a complete explanation.  Have a good one! 


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Jean~~




           "Conversation is an exercise of the mind; gossip is merely an exercise of the tongue." 



I agree.
>>> OR: I agree with that point. 

Conversation needs thinking, but gossip is just meaningless.
>>> Meaningful conversation requires thought, but gossip lacks substance.
>>> OR: Engaging in discourse demands reflection, whereas gossip is devoid of purpose.

I don’t like gossip, but I sometimes talk about people who hurt me.
>>> I don't enjoy gossiping, but I do sometimes speak about those who've hurt me.
>>> OR:  Though I refrain from gossiping, I do discuss personal experiences involving difficult people.
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