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What do you want to squeeze in your activities nowadays?

송정아/2025-07-31

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I want to squeeze painting in my activities. After I retired, I really wanted to paint landscapes or flowers. But, I can’t paint right now because of n my neck disc. When my health improve, I will paint anytime.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Jane!

You are a very active and energetic person. I hope that your neck disk will be better and all the things that you want to pursue will be achievable.

Painting is a very relaxing hobby. Not only that it is creative, it also enhances our attention to details.

You did a wonderful job in putting all of your ideas in these sentences. Congratulations for composing all these correct sentences!

See you again in class.

-T. Donna~

I want to squeeze painting in my activities. After I retired, I really wanted to paint landscapes or flowers. But, I can’t paint right now because of n my neck disc. When my health improve, I will paint anytime.
>>Correct!
OR: I want to squeeze painting in my activities. After I retired, I really wanted to paint landscapes or flowers. But, I can’t paint right now because of my neck disc. When my health improve, I will paint anytime. Very good sentences!
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