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The homework for 31st July.

조윤호/2025-08-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Q : What would you do if your mobile phone gets lost and you are waiting for many important calls? A : It can be differ from case by case. If I know the phone number of the counterparts, I will call him by other phone. However, If I don't know the phone number of the counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately. Since many Koreans are using a message app like "KAKAO TALK", I will inform a message through PC version.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Eddy,

As always, thank you for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
Your solution is very practical. Using the PC version of KakaoTalk is one of the best approaches in this situation.

Thank you for your time tonight. Have a blast tomorrow! See you again on Monday, if you're not busy. :)

- Teacher Elly~

A : It can be differ from case by case.

>> It can differ case by case.

OR >> It can be different in each case.

If I know the phone number of the counterparts, I will call him by other phone.
>> If I know the phone number of my counterpart, I will call him/her using another phone.

OR >> If I know the phone number of my counterparts, I will call them using another phone.

However, If I don't know the phone number of the counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
>> However, if I don’t know the phone number of my counterparts, I will go to a phone shop and buy a new one immediately.
*Just a small grammar fix: lowercase 'if'.

Since many Koreans are using a message app like "KAKAO TALK", I will inform a message through PC version.
>> Since many Koreans use a messaging app like KakaoTalk, I will send a message through the PC version.