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What is your favorite restaurant? What do you order there?

송정아/2025-08-01

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I like Italian restaurants. Hello Audrey, located in Gyeonggi-do Bundang, is a famous Italian restaurant. It has delicious food and a beautiful garden. I invited my friends there. I usually eat pasta, fungi salad, and risotto. If Donna comes to Gyeonggi-do Korea, it would visit this place.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Jane!

You have great taste in cuisine. Aside from your favorite Ethiopian coffee, you also like Western food.

I searched Hello Audrey on Google and found a beautiful facade and a glass share of the restaurant. Needless to say, the place is Instagram-worthy and the food is sumptuous. Thank you for the recommendation. I hope to visit this classy place someday soon.

Here on your composition, only the last sentence has a suggestion. Please compare the correct grammar pattern and use them correctly in your daily conversation. A job well done!

See you in class.

-T. Donna~

I like Italian restaurants.
Hello Audrey, located in Gyeonggi-do Bundang, is a famous Italian restaurant.

>> Correct! Very good sentences!

It has delicious food and a beautiful garden.
I invited my friends there.

>> Correct!

I usually eat pasta, fungi salad, and risotto.
If Donna comes to Gyeonggi-do Korea, it would visit this place.

>> ... If you go to Gyeonggi-do, Korea, it would be nice to visit this place.