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I want to go 'TOMORROW X TOGETHER' concert.

유수빈/2025-08-01

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I want to go 'TOMORROW X TOGETHER' concert. Because I'm practicing this group's dancing in my club. So if I have a chance to go idol's concert, I want to go their concert.

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Ho Kara!

I have never been to a concert.

Many people enjoy concerts, I know it's fun, but the music is too loud.

I would end up having a headache that would kill the fun.

Andrea

I want to go 'TOMORROW X TOGETHER' concert. Because I'm practicing this group's dancing in my club.

>> I want to go 'TOMORROW X TOGETHER' concert because I'm practicing this group's dance in my club.

So if I have a chance to go idol's concert, I want to go their concert.

>> So if I have a chance to go idol's concert, I want to go to their concert.