1. How often do you go to a convenience store? I go to a convenience store twice a week. Because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar. I want to eat every day, but they are too high calories. So I endure eating these. And I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently 2. What are the best and worst things about the convenience store near your house? The best thing is that I don't have to walk away for a long time It is too convenient because I can buy something right away without a car The worst thing is that I want to go there everyday. There is a 'CU' convenience store near my house. It is famous for delicious desserts like cream breads. So I can go easily there, but it is not good for my health.

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I go to a convenience store twice a week. Because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar.

>>I go to a convenience store twice a week because I like to eat chocolate or protein bar.

I want to eat every day, but they are too high calories. So I endure eating these.

>>I want to eat it every day, but they are too high in calories so I resist it. 
And I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently.

>> I go to a convenience store to buy something urgently.
The best thing is that I don't have to walk away for a long time.

>>The best thing is that I don't have to walk for a long time.

Or>>The best thing is that I don’t have to walk far.
It is too convenient because I can buy something right away without a car

>>It’s very convenient because I can buy things right away without using a car.

The worst thing is that I want to go there everyday.

>>The problem is, I want to go there all the time.

There is a 'CU' convenience store near my house.

>> A CU convenience store is located near my house. 
It is famous for delicious desserts like cream breads.

>>It's known for its delicious desserts, especially cream bread.
So I can go easily there, but it is not good for my health.

>>So I can go there easily, but it's not good for my health.