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김나영/2025-08-04

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After I go to hometown in JeJu, I play a fun with my dog. Dog run on the street, so I run together with my dog.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey there, Na Yeong! That sounds so sweet! Running with your dog in Jeju must have been a lot of fun.

~T. Jenna

After I go to hometown in JeJu, I play a fun with my dog.

>>After I went to my hometown in Jeju, I had fun playing with my dog.

Dog run on the street, so I run together with my dog.

>>My dog ran on the street, so I ran together with her.

>>We both ran happily on the street together.