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How can extreme weather conditions affect our social life?

이승훈/2025-08-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
extreme weather conditions are many affect our lifes. first, drought is difficult to farmer's lifes. drought makes crops killed, because no water and very hot. so we should be buying expensive crops. second, flood and typoon is difficult to many people lifes. they are make destroy many pepole's home and many properties. third, extreme weather conditions are make many stress, not good health and destroy ecosystem.
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Hi, Hun!
You are right! Extreme weather conditions affect our lives greatly, from agriculture, to properties, to our mental health. It is difficult to control now because of climate change, but I think we have to learn how to adapt and do something about it. Also, great job on your sentences. Just take note that people is plural, so we use lives instead of life.
-T. Caitlyn
extreme weather conditions are many affect our lifes.
>> Extreme weather conditions affect our lives in many ways.
first, drought is difficult to farmer's lifes.
>> First, drought is difficult for farmers.
drought makes crops killed, because no water and very hot.
>> Drought kills crops because there is no water and it is very hot.
so we should be buying expensive crops.
>> So we have to buy expensive crops.
second, flood and typoon is difficult to many people lifes.
>> Second, floods and typhoons are difficult for many people's lives.
they are make destroy many pepole's home and many properties.
>> They destroy many people's homes and properties.
third, extreme weather conditions are make many stress, not good health and destroy ecosystem.
>> Third, extreme weather conditions cause stress, poor health, and damage to the ecosystem.
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