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I think the most memorable food or activity is pork and rice soup. It is very delicious. And Busan is known as home of pork and rise soup.

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Hi, Jacob!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

I think the most memorable food or activity is pork and rice soup.

>> I think the most memorable food and activity that I ever done was eating pork and rice soup.

It is very delicious.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It is very tasty.

And Busan is known as home of pork and rise soup.

>> Also, Busan is known as the "Home of Pork and Rice Soup".

OR >> Also, Busan is known for their Pork and Rice Soup".