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What’s more important to you when you travel-comfort and relaxation or stimulating new expriences?

권수경/2025-08-06

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1,For me, travel is a time for relaxation and healing with my family. 2,So I prefer comforable trip rather than experiencing too much. 3,Sometimes, I sleep in and enjoy a leisurely trip rather than being pressed for time by a strict schedule. 4, Depending on the situation,sometimes My husband decides on our destination and hotel in the morning.
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Here's your corrected composition, Ms. Jane. I appreciate your sending it.  Please go over the revisions given below. Have a wonderful evening there!  


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Jean~~



                   What’s more important to you when you travel-comfort and relaxation or stimulating new experiences?


For me, travel is a time for relaxation and healing with my family.
>>> Traveling with my family provides me with a much-needed opportunity to relax and heal.

So I prefer comforable trip rather than experiencing too much.
>>> I prefer a relaxing trip instead of constantly trying to experience everything.

Sometimes, I sleep in and enjoy a leisurely trip rather than being pressed for time by a strict schedule.
>>> I prefer a leisurely trip with no rigid schedule, so I can sleep in and not feel rushed.
>>> OR: Rather than sticking to a tight schedule and feeling rushed, I sometimes choose to sleep in and enjoy a leisurely trip.

Depending on the situation,sometimes
My husband decides on our destination and hotel in the morning.
>>> Sometimes, my husband spontaneously decides on our destination and hotel in the morning.
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