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이유민/2025-08-06

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While I traveled in Philippines, many people gave us hands. After check-in, we left passports on the front unintentionally, and a stranger took them and gave us them. In other day, it rained heavily and I fell down my beach towel on the wet road, so it was really wet. And a boss of the tour took and dried it.

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Hi, Megan^^
It's been a while.
Thank you for sharing.
I'm happy to know that you met good people during your trip in our country.
_T. SHAY^^
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While I traveled in Philippines, many people gave us hands.

>>While I was traveling in the Philippines, many people gave us a hand.
After check-in, we left passports on the front unintentionally, and a stranger took them and gave us them.

>>After check-in, we left our passports at the front desk unintentionally, and a stranger picked them up and gave them to us.
In other day, it rained heavily and I fell down my beach towel on the wet road, so it was really wet.

>>One day, it rained heavily, and I dropped my beach towel on the wet road, so it got really wet.
And a boss of the tour took and dried it.

>>And the tour guide took it and dried it.