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권경희/2025-08-08

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
The South and the North government are doing very consumed and wasteful political propaganda still. I agree this decision removing loudspeakers in border. Of course it is difficult to communicate negotiate with the North government in an authoritarian system .
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Lily!
I agree with you, and I hope that they won't put it back. 
Thank you for this!
Aki~


The South and the North government are doing very consumed and wasteful political propaganda still.
>>> The South and the North Korean governments are still doing very consuming and wasteful political propaganda.

I agree this decision removing loudspeakers in border.
>>> I agree with this decision to remove loudspeakers at the border.

Of course it is difficult to communicate negotiate with the North government in an authoritarian system.
>>> Of course, it is difficult to communicate and negotiate with the North Korean government in an authoritarian system.
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