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: Do you like having visitors at your home? Why or why not?
김영순/2025-08-08
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
To be honest, I don't like coming at my home.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
Instead of, I"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Young Soon!
I understand your point.
Let's just work hard on your sentence structure.
Thank you for sharing today.^^
~~Teacher Sharon
To be honest, I don't like coming at my home.
>> To be honest, I don't like coming home.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
Because I have to clean, organized well in my house and to cook and then I feel tired.
>> It's because I have to clean, organize my house and cook which make me feel tired.
Instead of, I"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
Instead of, I"d like to meet out, at the cafe or restaurant.
>> I just like meeting someone at a cafe or restaurant instead.
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