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If you could register for a course or lesson, what would it be and why?

이지윤/2025-08-09

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would like to register for a baking lesson or cooking lesson. Because bakig or cooking is what I'm interested in these days. I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally and make various breads and foods and I think I can increase my professionalism.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi!

Thank you for sharing your answer.

Oh, a cooking or baking lesson would be so awesome.

I hope that you will be able to try it soon. ^^

~ Teacher Gina

I would like to register for a baking lesson or cooking lesson.
>> CORRECT.

>> Or: I’d like to sign up for a baking or cooking class.

Because bakig or cooking is what I'm interested in these days.

>> Because baking or cooking is what I’m interested in these days.

I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally and make various breads and foods and I think I can increase my professionalism.

>> I think it will be fun because I can learn professionally, make various breads and dishes, and improve my skills.