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이상도/2025-08-09

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HOMEWORK: Which is better: studying abroad or in your own country? I think each of them has his or her strengths and weaknesses. Studying abroad is helpful for a lot of learning in terms of language. People listen and speak a lot, and linguistic development takes place. Working abroad will assist in that process and help you speak the language better. If you study domestically, you will be able to study easily. Studying in a familiar language and environment is psychological and very helpful, which means it can be very helpful in learning.
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Hello, Alex!
Many Koreans take the opportunity to study abroad, and if you can, I hope you’ll do the same, as it’s a great experience that can help develop both your skills and character.
Chammy
Studying abroad is helpful for a lot of learning in terms of language. 
>> Studying abroad is very helpful for language learning.
People listen and speak a lot, and linguistic development takes place.
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>> People listen and speak a lot, which leads to language development.
 Working abroad will assist in that process and help you speak the language better.
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>> Working overseas will help you improve your language skills.
If you study domestically, you will be able to study easily. 
>> If you study in your home country, learning can be easier.
Studying in a familiar language and environment is psychological and very helpful, which means it can be very helpful in learning.
>>Studying in a familiar language and environment can provide psychological comfort, which is also very helpful for learning.
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