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Write about your most recent vacation.

차진혁/2025-08-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
My most recent vacation is very fun because I'm a swimming in the pool and eat a crab. So my vacation is very fun.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Here's your corrected composition, Jimmy.  Please take a look at the corrections below. See you later!  


Cheers,
Jean~~

                              
                              Write about your most recent vacation.



My most recent vacation is very fun because I'm a swimming in the pool and eat a crab.
>>> My most recent vacation was a lot of fun. I went swimming in the pool and ate crab. 

So my vacation is very fun.
>>> Overall, it was a really enjoyable trip.

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