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Yes, I consider.

유수빈/2025-08-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Yes, I consider. Most people like cat and dog as a pet, but for me, a rabbit can be my pet. Because this animal is so smart, and also cute.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Kara! 

My niece has a rabbit. 
It actually stays inside the house. 
They treat it as a regular pet.
It sleeps on their bed. 

Andrea 

Yes, I consider.
>> Correct 

Most people like cat and dog as a pet, but for me, a rabbit can be my pet.
>> Most people like cats and dogs as pets, but for me, a rabbit can be my pet.

Because this animal is so smart, and also cute.
>> This animal is so smart and cute. 

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