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My work routine

정지용/2025-08-11

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I go to work until 8:20 AM. Fist of all, I check my today's schedule and e-mail. After that, I conduct my work such as wiper design, sending e-mail, meeting. I have a lunch with my colleague in company canteen at 12:30 PM. After having a lunch, I take a rest until 1:30 PM. The afternoon tasks is similar to the morning tasks. I conduct my work such as wiper design, sending e-mail, meeting. Sometimes I discuss about some project with my customer. And I enjoy coffee for a minute. I finish the work about 6:00 PM.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Jayjay!

Thank you for doing your homework. I hope you have a good night~!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. I go to work until 8:20 AM.
>>I go to work before/at 8:20 AM.

2. Fist of all, I check my today's schedule and e-mail.
>>The first thing that I do is check my schedule for the day and my e-mail.

3. After that, I conduct my work such as wiper design, sending e-mail, meeting.
>>After that, I conduct my work such as wiper designing, sending e-mails, and attending meetings.

4. I have a lunch with my colleague in company canteen at 12:30 PM.
>>I then have lunch with my colleague in the company canteen at 12:30 PM.

5. After having a lunch, I take a rest until 1:30 PM. The afternoon tasks is similar to the morning tasks.
>>After having lunch, I take a rest until 1:30 PM. The afternoon tasks are similar to the morning tasks.

6. I conduct my work such as wiper design, sending e-mail, meeting. 
>>(This sentence may be erased.)

7. Sometimes I discuss about some project with my customer. And I enjoy coffee for a minute.
>>Sometimes I discuss about some projects with my customer, and I enjoy some coffee for a minute.

8. I finish the work about 6:00 PM.
>>I finish work at about 6:00 PM.

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