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What Korean food culture are you most proud of?

김재서/2025-08-12

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I think the part of Korean food culture I’m most proud of is our traditional food. For example, Kimchi is the best. It’s healthy because it’s fermented. I also like that many dishes are shared at the table. It feels warm and friendly. So I’m most proud of our traditional food culture.

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What Korean food culture are you most proud of?

I think the part of Korean food culture I’m most proud of is our traditional food.

>>> I think the aspect of Korean food culture I’m most proud of is our traditional cuisine.

>>> OR: I’m especially proud of Korean traditional food as a key part of our food culture.

For example, Kimchi is the best. It’s healthy because it’s fermented.

>>> For example, kimchi is one of the best dishes. It’s healthy because it’s fermented.

>>> OR: Kimchi, a staple in Korean cuisine, is especially healthy thanks to its fermentation.

I also like that many dishes are shared at the table.

>>> OR: I appreciate the tradition of sharing many dishes at the table.

It feels warm and friendly.

>>> OR: The atmosphere feels welcoming and friendly.

So I’m most proud of our traditional food culture.

>>> OR: Thus, I consider our traditional food culture a source of great pride.