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김윤현/2025-08-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I went valley with family last week. We ate delicious food there. My daughter and I swam in there. Many people visited there. but, We enjoyed cool wind and releax. I would like go there next year too.
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Hi, Neo!

Thank you for answering your homework. I hope you have a good rest!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes to remember:

1. I went valley with family last week.
>>I went to the valley with my family last week.

2. We ate delicious food there. My daughter and I swam in there.
>>We ate delicious food there, and my daughter and I swam in (the river).

3. Many people visited there. but, We enjoyed cool wind and releax.
>>Many people like us visited the place to enjoy the cool wind and to relax.

4. I would like go there next year too.
>>I would like go there next year, too.

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