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Do you think traditional media, like newspapers and television, will disappear in the future? Why or

김영순/2025-08-14

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I think people won't rely on traditional media in the future. That is because it is convenient to use the mobile and wearable devices. It is even easy to carry.

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Hi Young Soon!
You have been consistent with your development.
Your skills are improving.
Make sure to challenge yourself more.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I think people won't rely on traditional media in the future.

>> Correct
That is because it is convenient to use the mobile and wearable devices.

>> That is because it is convenient to use mobile and wearable devices.
It is even easy to carry.

>> They are even easy to carry.