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김나영/2025-08-15

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Yes. When I look people in need in the bus, I yield my seat. Because I think them too hard.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Na Yeong! That’s very kind of you. Giving your seat shows you care about others.
~T. Jenna

Yes. When I look people in need in the bus, I yield my seat.

>>Yes. When I see people in need on the bus, I give them my seat.

>>Yes, I do. For example, I usually offer my seat to people in need when I am on the bus.

Because I think them too hard.

>>I do this because I think it is too hard for them to stand.

>>I do this because they may feel weak or uncomfortable standing.