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What is your New Year\'s resolution?

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Dear Don,

Happy New Year!! and Thank you for your lesson.
Today I was not ready to your lesson and so my talking was not good.
Frenkly, I didn't study in English for 5days of holiday. begining of this last year, when I have a time, I did English listening. but these days, I didn't do so.
So, My New Year's resolution is a level up of English speaking than last year.

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Hi Andrew!

Happy New Year! Great year ahead of us!

T. DON

Dear Don,

Happy New Year!! and Thank you for your lesson.
>> CORRECT

Today I was not ready to your lesson and so my talking was not good.
>> Today I was not ready for your lesson so I wasn't good in speaking.   

Frenkly, I didn't study in English for 5days of holiday. begining of this last year, when I have a time, I did English listening. but these days, I didn't do so.
>> Frankly, I didn't study English for 5 days including the holiday.  Earlier this year, when I had time, I tried to listened to English but these  past few days, I didn't do so. 

So, My New Year's resolution is a level up of English speaking than last year.
>> So My New Year's resolution is to improve or level up my English speaking or conversation better than last year.
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