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you know that we are living in the world spread virus.
I feel like that we would have a depress living in this year
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but currently I'm really depressing now..

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Hi, Jin. The situation we have experienced last year is nothing we have encountered before and it really is depressing. Most people would say this is the "new normal." It is hard to deal with the current situation but all we can do is make do with what we have and make the best of the current situation. I am glad you are into diving these days. I bet it is a good distraction from everything that is going on.^^ Have a good night. Cheers! ~Teacher Jane c",)


well.. I don\'t have any special treat form yet..
>> Well, I do not have any special treat for myself yet.

you know that we are living in the world spread virus.
>> You know that we are living in a world that has a widespread virus.

I feel like that we would have a depress living in this year
>> I feel that we would have a depressing situation this year.

I know we can get more powerful thing for our better life as hardly as you get .
but currently I'm really depressing now..
>> I know we can work hard on having a better life but currently, I am really feeling depressed.
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