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Why is English fluency significant for you?

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I think it's better to speak English fluently than can not speak.
My older sister is good at speaking English. One of her friends even told me that it sounds like foreigner.
I don't have special reason. But I'm sure that it will be helpful.

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Hello Cathy. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth

I think it's better to speak English fluently than can not speak.
>>>  I think it's better to speak English fluently than not being able to speak it at all.  
My older sister is good at speaking English. 
>>> correct   
One of her friends even told me that it sounds like foreigner.
>>> One of her friends even told me that she sounded like a foreigner.   
I don't have special reason. 
>>> I don't have a special reason.    
But I'm sure that it will be helpful.
>>> correct   
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