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Essay: what are your three wishes for the new year?

my first wish Is being healthy all of my family.
and my second wish is no corona virus in our planet .
and my third wish is I can read more books.
and that's my three wishes of the new year.






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Hello Ruby!
Wow, there are good wishes, and if only I could grant your wish, I would do it immediately, but I hope that your wishes will be granted this year! ^ ^
-Rachel
my first wish Is being healthy all of my family.
>> My first wish is for all of my family to be healthy. 
and my second wish is no corona virus in our planet .
>> My second wish is for the corona virus to disappear from our planet. 
and my third wish is I can read more books.
>> correct
>> OR: My final wish is to read more books. 
and that's my three wishes of the new year.
>> Those are my three wishes for the new year. 
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