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Dear Don,

I love Ramen, so I ate it every week. You think, It is very easy to make it, but I don't think so.
Ramen is very easy food, but if it is boiled it over the time, it's is not delicious taste. it is very important to keep the time and tempature wheh it is boild. so I think, whoever make it, but I make it best.

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Hi Andrew!

Wonderful Thursday!

Dear Don,

I love Ramen, so I ate it every week. You think, It is very easy to make it, but I don't think so.
>>  I love Ramen, so I eat it every week. Do you think it is very easy to make it? I don't think so.

Ramen is very easy food, but if it is boiled it over the time, it's is not delicious taste. it is very important to keep the time and tempature wheh it is boild. so I think, whoever make it, but I make it best.
>> Ramen is very easy to make food, but if it is overcooked, the taste is not delicious. it is very important to keep the time and temperature when you boil the water. I think I am the best in making it.
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