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1. Why do people love pets?

Because pets are cute.

2. How do people take care of their pets?

People feed them and play with them to take care of them.

3. Do you have any allergies?

Yes, I'm allergic to peach.

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Hello there Geonha! Your homework was great today!

Until the next one!

See you in class tomorrow!

~Teacher Sheila

Because pets are cute.
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People feed them and play with them to take care of them.
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OR>>People take care of them by feeding and playing with them.

Yes, I'm allergic to peach.
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