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2021-01-08 336

회원님의 영작문



Dear Anna,

I was very pleased to receive your letter that things are going well for you.
How are you these days? I hope everything is going well.

I am writing to give you advice about going on camping holiday

first of all, If we go on a camping, we going to have great time for our bonding.
as you know, we haven't been in touch for a while, since you entered Hanbat university.
throughout these time, we live a busy life.

actually, I think there are some disadvantages for us.
for example, I am preparing IELTS exam for 7 point score,
but if we go on a camping holiday, we cannot help preparing for camping.
it will take so many time for my preparing exam.

in fact, I want to focus on the my IELTS test.
how about invite your friend Susan, so that you don't need to feel lonely.
As we know, she is really understanding and energetic , she will make you happy

Take care, I really miss you and would like to see you again very soon.

Best wishes
your good friend,
Kiseok Lee

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday Lee! 

Thank you for sending me this letter to read and suggest some grammar point to. I must say you have written it very well with less mistake.

I have further suggestions to discuss in class when I see you later about what other ways to refuse a friend or someone's offer.

See you later and have a wonderful day!

-T. Donna =)

Dear Anna,
>> Correct!

I was very pleased to receive your letter that things are going well for you.
How are you these days? I hope everything is going well.
>> Correct!

I am writing to give you advice about going on camping holiday
>> I am writing to give you an advice about going on a camping holiday.

first of all, If we go on a camping, we going to have great time for our bonding.
as you know, we haven't been in touch for a while, since you entered Hanbat university.
throughout these time, we live a busy life.
>> First of all, If we go on a camping, we are going to have great time for our bonding.
As you know, we haven't been in touch for a while, since you entered Hanbat university.
Throughout these times, we live a busy life.

actually, I think there are some disadvantages for us.
for example, I am preparing IELTS exam for 7 point score,
but if we go on a camping holiday, we cannot help preparing for camping.
it will take so many time for my preparing exam.
>> Actually, I think there are some disadvantages for us.
For example, I am preparing for my IELTS exam for a 7-point score,
but if we go on a camping holiday, we cannot help preparing for the camping.
It will take so much time to prepare for my exam.

in fact, I want to focus on the my IELTS test.
how about invite your friend Susan, so that you don't need to feel lonely.
As we know, she is really understanding and energetic , she will make you happy
>> In fact, I want to focus on the my IELTS test.
How about inviting your friend Susan so that you don't need to feel lonely.
As we know, she is really understanding and energetic , she will make you happy.

Take care, I really miss you and would like to see you again very soon.
>> Correct!

Best wishes
>> Correct! Or: (Add period at the end of the sentence.)

your good friend,
>> Correct! 
Or: Your good friend,

Kiseok Lee
>> Correct!
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